Workshop 2

For anyone who missed class, below are the drafts for our next workshops. For each paper you need to send a 100-word email to the author cc-ing me (If you don't have their e-mail address, just send it to me).

Your email must mention one strength and one weakness. For the weakness you need to provide a detailed explanation of what you think is causing in the weakness and how the author might correct it.

Kelsey:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgvs8pg4vb2q

Karina:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgvtbjnwr3sr

Andy:

Spencer: