Workshop 1

For anyone who missed class, below are the drafts for our next workshops.

For each paper you need to send a 100-word email to the author cc-ing me (If you don't have their e-mail address, just send it to me). You email must mention one strength and one weakness. For the weakness you need to provide a detailed explanation of what you think is causing in the weakness and how the author might correct it.

Jason:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgq56sdpt37d

Alyssa:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgq59tnxcfrw

Nikki:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgq6fjp5fkc8

Paige:
http://www.writely.com/View.aspx?docid=bbgtchrf4qdqn